This weeks writing challenge

Date: 21st Apr 2020 @ 9:51am

This weeks writing challenge

Before the Easter holidays we challenged you to make your own story map for your new vehicle story. Now it’s time to dig those out!

This week we would like you to write your new vehicle story.

 Remember it will need:

Character introduction

Setting description

Problem

Resolution

Ending

Adjectives

Punctuation

Read my new Naughty vehicle story for ideas on how to create your own.

 

The outrageous bike!

by Miss Riley

This is for you, I hope you’re a good rider. It’s a shiny bright blue bike! Let’s play!

I am a speedy super bike and I live in Manchester. Where I live the building are gigantic and there are hundreds of busy people! I zoom in and out and when people want to pass I whizz around them!

Nothing gets in my way! I flip and I twirl and I zoom so fast! But oh no! What’s this? It’s a ramp! AHHHHHH I’m flyyyyyingggg! SMASH!

 

I’ll help you said a kind and friendly scooter. I will pick you up and brush you off! Now you are nice and clean!

I will never ever zoom around again! Now I am a sloowwww and shiny bike.

If you need to watch Naughty bus again to get some ideas here’s the video…

Naughty Bus

 

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