Miss Thornton’s literacy group-Haunted House Sentences.
Date: 15th Mar 2018 @ 10:39am
Here is one of our super sentences we wrote together yesterday.
Cautiously, I tip-toed into the silent, shadowy basement because I wanted to find the mysterious, golden key.
We also had a go at writing our own.
Inquisitively, I hurried up the old, spiral staircase but I heard a noise, froze and charged upstairs!
Slowly, I crawled up the old, creaky staircase to find the Ruby Heart.
Quietly, I crept up the old, narrow staircase but when I reached the top a strange force pushed me down.
Cautiously, I ran up the creaky staircase but an old bony hand reached out and pushed me down.
Slowly, I crept up the old narrow stairs but when I reached the top, a pair of hands pushed me back.
Quickly, I crept up the old, narrow stairs but when I reached the top, a dark figure was waiting for me.
Anxiously, I crept up the narrow , creepy stairs but when I reached the top a wolf leapt out and pounced on me.
Silently, I crept up the spiral, narrow stairs, but straight after I had reached the top, the stairs collapsed behind me. I was trapped forever!
Courageously, I crept up the old, putrid-smelling staircase, and when I reached the top, there was a huge Egyptian mirror, with an eye-ball staring straight back at me.
Suspiciously, I tip-toed up the creaky, old stairs because I heard a strange noise coming from the attic.
Cautiously, I stepped into the huge Master bedroom, collapsing at the sight of a ghost! Whist I was unconscious, I dreamt that I stumbled to my grave and was buried alive.
Slowly, I sneaked up the giant, spiral staircase, but suddenly I plummeted down a disguised trap door.
I hope you liked our sentences. Look out tomorrow for our spooky embedded clauses and three part sentences…