Sentence of The Day

Date: 29th Apr 2020 @ 9:26am

Good morning year 6. Today we are going to continue to look at Spooky Stories and the sentence you are going to explore would be ideal for you to use at the start of a Spooky Story to hook in your reader. 

As the feirce wind howled around Tom and Ahmet, the moonlight giving them limited visibility, they aprehensively walked up the uneven path and approached the ancient uninviting gates which guarded the monstrous house beyond. 

Can you find two spelling errors? They are quite tricky!

I have also missed out an important piece of punctuation. CLUE- It is used to separate adjectives.

I would also like you to think of a better word than walked.

Write out your sentence and send it to us at our email address or Tweet us your sentence.

EXTRA, EXTRA!!

Could you now add to my sentence using DAD - I have written the description now you can add an action from the characters then some dialogue?