Haunted House stories

Date: 13th Jun 2019 @ 11:41am

Today we scared ourselves silly sharing our Haunted House stories!

"I loved the brilliant description in Paige's story- I could really imagine the scary house from all her similes and metaphors."      Aminat

"Saina's story was really scary and spooky, I could really see feel how scared her character's were." Lora

"Fantastic vocabulary in Brandon's story." Thomas

I really liked the way Aminat didn't give the ending away- it was really dramatic... and SCARY!  Nahara

"Ryan used brillant vocabulary to create a spooky atmosphere." Thomas

"Thomas and Daim had brilliant description mixed in with dialogue and action." Paige 

"Daim's character's jumped off the page" Brandon

 

 

 

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