Year 4 editors

Date: 23rd Nov 2018 @ 1:15pm

Today, year 4 were practising their editing skills in pairs. They reviewed the 5 parts of their disaster story by checking for punctuation, missing words and making sense. Then they used purple pen to fix their errors and improve their work with juicy adjectives and adverbs!

Great job, year 4!

‘We create, We explore,


We care, We soar’

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Ravensbury Community School

Tartan StreetClayton M11 4EG

Maureen Hughes | Headteacher

Jo Wendt | SENCO

0161 223 0370

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